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In December 2012, we were staying at a farmhouse‑style hotel. The room had an old coffee maker, and I can’t remember if there was a refrigerator, but there was definitely no microwave. There was a small minimart at the gas station nearby, and that’s where I bought my noodle cup.
Later that night, I wanted to make the noodles, but my mind went blank. I couldn’t think of any way to heat the water without a microwave. I told my husband, and he immediately grabbed the coffee maker and filled the glass pot with water. Then it hit me — why didn’t I think of that? I never drank coffee in Thailand, and I had never used a coffee maker before. Back home, we had electric hot‑water dispensers: press a button, and hot water comes out. I hadn’t seen those in the U.S. at that time, except once in a Chinese store in Delaware.
Back to my noodles — the water heated up in the coffee pot, and my husband poured the hot water into my noodle cup. Yippy! I could finally enjoy my noodles. But then I realized there were no spoons or chopsticks. I hadn’t looked for them at the minimart because I assumed the hotel room would have some, or that I could ask the front desk like in other hotels. But it was after midnight, and I didn’t want to walk outside to the office, which was in a separate building.
The hotel layout was simple: long rows of rooms in an L‑shape, a frozen outdoor swimming pool in the center, and a tiny front building that served as the office and check‑in counter.
I looked around the room again and found tiny straws inside the paper coffee cups. I grabbed two and used them as chopsticks. And surprisingly, it worked. I sat on the floor, leaning against the bed, and happily enjoyed my noodles.
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It was in December 2012 ,, we were in a farmhouse‑style hotel.
There were anan old coffee maker in the room, and I did not remember if there was a refrigerator but there was no microwave.
There was a local minimart at the gas station where I got my noodle cup.
I wanted to make the noodles but I could not think,. I didn’t know how to make them without a microwave.
I told my husband,. Then he grabbed the coffee pot and poured water into it.
OH! Why didn’t I think of this?
I did notn’t drink coffee and did notn’t use a coffee maker in Thailand.
We had an electric hot‑water machine where you push a button and hot water comes out.
I did notn’t see that in the USA at that time.
I only saw one at a Chinese store in Delaware.
Back to my noodles,— the water was filling the glass coffee pot and my husband was pouring hot water into my noodle cup.
Yippy,! I could finally enjoy my noodles but there were no spoons or chopsticks.
I did not look for them at the minimart because I thought there would be some in the room or that I could ask at the counter like other hotels.
Eventually, I saw none in the room and it was after







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