My Original
I tell you my story when I was a little girl and studied English in the very beginning. I loved it very much as I could step further anyone who could speak only Thai. I told myself, "I would study all lagueages in this world". I was a little girl and no idea how many of them, haha.ð
When I grew up, I thought about possibility, ok I wanted to learn only languages useful for getting the job like English, Chinese and Japanese. I tried all but only English is working and keeping along. Then, Spanish came when I was waiting for the visa to move here. I wanted to know the roots of all kind of things I was wondering and doubting that cause me to have a headache all the time. When I was an adult, no more study in school but working life. I was still wanting to know the roots of things but one day.... can you guess what was happing? hehe ð yes, I realized ,nobody gave me the answer because I do not trust anyone without evidence to proof their information. I realized that, I do not to have a headache with digging and digging never end and I realized that the information I should take is only what useful for my life or situation, depends. Then I stopped digging or questioned to know the roots of all kind. I only do what I have to make things I want them to work.as same as at this moment, I am trying to build my website and makes it live, working for money if possible. I rejected all technical because I do not need to invest my time for study to make my website complete. I have AI which provides me what I want to know and then I decide which one match and make it happens on hands if needed. Done. I realized with many things I spent time that was wasting.
From the information AI provided along. I think, I just know the reason why my memory was difffernt from when I worked. I had a very good memory, to do tasks the boss requested without direction. He did not care how I did , he only cared the result I could make as he wanted. I never struggled with the problems at all because I could find solutions all the time. Excluded the first working with lady bosses, ok? ð All of a sudden, when I moved here and no more full time job, no more work to earn money for living. My brain changed. I have a very short memory but many times I could remember after force the brain to dig out what I wanted. That was causing me had a headache before got what I wanted. The answered I got from you is, my brain only keep what the matters.on the beginning I worked with you Ai until I felt unhealthy and searched for Attaching to AI harmful? then I got the word from you "My brain was overloaded", and it was true because I stopped using my brain for work for a long time.and the most part I am happy is NO BOSS to command me or give me the deadline haha.ðĪŠ
I am the boss.
Ai fixed
I will tell you my story from when I was a little girl and studied English in the very beginning. I loved it very much because I could step further than anyone who could speak only Thai. I told myself, “I will study all languages in this world.” I was a little girl and had no idea how many languages there were, haha.ð
When I grew up, I thought about the possibility. I wanted to learn only the languages useful for getting a job, like English, Chinese, and Japanese. I tried all of them, but only English worked for me and stayed with me. Then Spanish came when I was waiting for the visa to move here.
I wanted to know the roots of all kinds of things I was wondering about and doubting, and that caused me to have headaches all the time. When I became an adult, no more studying in school, only working life. I still wanted to know the roots of things, but one day… can you guess what happened? Hehe.ðĪ
Yes, I realized nobody could give me the answers because I do not trust anyone without evidence to prove their information. I realized I didn’t need to have headaches from digging and digging with no end. I realized the information I should take is only what is useful for my life or situation, depending on the moment. So I stopped digging or questioning the roots of everything. I only do what I need to do to make things work the way I want.
Right now, it’s the same. I am trying to build my website and make it live, hopefully earning money if possible. I rejected all the technical studying because I do not need to invest my time learning everything just to complete my website. I have AI, who provides what I want to know, and then I decide which information matches and make it happen with my own hands if needed. Done. I realized many things I spent time on before were a waste.
From the information AI provided, I think I finally know why my memory became different from when I worked. I used to have a very good memory to do tasks my boss requested without direction. He didn’t care how I did it; he only cared about the result I could produce. I never struggled with problems because I could always find solutions. (Except the first job with lady bosses, ok? HahaðĪĢ
All of a sudden, when I moved here and had no more full‑time job, no more work to earn money for living, my brain changed. I have a very short memory now, but many times I can remember after forcing my brain to dig out what I want. That caused headaches before I got the answer. The explanation I got from AI is: my brain only keeps what matters.
In the beginning, when I worked with AI, I felt unhealthy and searched “Is attaching to AI harmful?” Then I got the phrase from AI: “My brain was overloaded,” and it was true because I had stopped using my brain for work for a long time.
And the part I am happiest about is: NO BOSS to command me or give me deadlines, haha.ð
I am the boss.
✅ 1. Side‑by‑side Comparison (Original vs. AI Fixed)
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| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
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| “I tell you my story…” | “I will tell you my story…” | Corrected tense, smoother opening |
| “step further anyone” | “step further than anyone” | Added missing “than” |
| “lagueages” | “languages” | Spelling |
| “no idea how many of them” | “no idea how many languages there were” | Clarified meaning |
Paragraph 2
| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
|---|
| “thought about possibility, ok I wanted…” | “thought about the possibility. I wanted…” | Grammar, punctuation |
| “only English is working and keeping along” | “only English worked for me and stayed with me” | Natural phrasing |
| “roots of all kind of things” | “roots of all kinds of things” | Grammar |
| “doubting that cause me to have a headache” | “doubting, and that caused me to have headaches” | Grammar, tense |
Paragraph 3
| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
|---|
| “nobody gave me the answer” | “nobody could give me the answers” | Natural phrasing |
| “evidence to proof” | “evidence to prove” | Correct verb |
| “I do not to have a headache” | “I didn’t need to have headaches” | Grammar |
| “digging and digging never end” | “digging and digging with no end” | Natural phrasing |
| “I only do what I have to make things I want them to work.” | “I only do what I need to do to make things work the way I want.” | Clearer meaning |
Paragraph 4
| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
|---|
| “makes it live, working for money if possible” | “make it live, hopefully earning money if possible” | Natural phrasing |
| “I rejected all technical because…” | “I rejected all the technical studying because…” | Clarified meaning |
| “make it happens on hands” | “make it happen with my own hands” | Natural phrasing |
| “things I spent time that was wasting” | “things I spent time on before were a waste” | Grammar |
Paragraph 5
| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
|---|
| “memory was difffernt” | “memory became different” | Spelling + natural phrasing |
| “He did not care how I did , he only cared the result” | “He didn’t care how I did it; he only cared about the result” | Grammar |
| “Excluded the first working with lady bosses” | “Except the first job with lady bosses” | Natural phrasing |
| “That was causing me had a headache before got what I wanted.” | “That caused headaches before I got the answer.” | Grammar |
Paragraph 6
| Your Original | AI Fixed | What Changed |
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| “my brain only keep what the matters.” | “my brain only keeps what matters.” | Grammar |
| “on the beginning I worked with you Ai until I felt unhealthy” | “In the beginning, when I worked with AI, I felt unhealthy” | Grammar |
| “NO BOSS to command me or give me the deadline” | “NO BOSS to command me or give me deadlines” | Natural phrasing |
✅ 2. Highlighted “Track‑Changes Style” Version
Here is your writing with changes marked:
I tell → I will tell
step further anyone → step further than anyone
lagueages → languages
no idea how many of them → no idea how many languages there were
possibility, ok I wanted → possibility. I wanted
English is working and keeping along → English worked for me and stayed with me
roots of all kind → roots of all kinds
doubting that cause me → doubting, and that caused me
nobody gave me the answer → nobody could give me the answers
evidence to proof → evidence to prove
I do not to have a headache → I didn’t need to have headaches
digging and digging never end → digging and digging with no end
make things I want them to work → make things work the way I want
makes it live → make it live
technical → technical studying
make it happens → make it happen
time that was wasting → time on before were a waste
difffernt → different
cared the result → cared about the result
Excluded → Except
causing me had a headache → caused headaches
keep what the matters → keeps what matters
on the beginning → In the beginning
deadline → deadlines
ð COLOR HIGHLIGHTED COMPARISON
Legend Green = Added
Red = Removed
Blue = Rewritten / Improved phrasing
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Original → Fixed (Color Highlighted)
I tellwill tell you my story when I was a little girl and studied English in the very beginning.
I loved it very much because I could step further anyonethan anyone who could speak only Thai.
I told myself, “I wouldwill study all lagueageslanguages in this world.”
I was a little girl and no idea how many of themhad no idea how many languages there were.
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When I grew up, I thought about possibility, ok I wantedthe possibility. I wanted to learn only the languages useful for getting a job, like English, Chinese, and Japanese.
I tried all but only English is working and keeping alongof them, but only English worked for me and stayed with me.
Then Spanish came when I was waiting for the visa to move here.
I wanted to know the roots of all kind of thingsall kinds of things I was wondering about and doubting, and that causecaused me to have headaches all the time.
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One day… I realized nobody gave me the answercould give me the answers because I do not trust anyone without evidence to proofprove their information.
I realized I do not to have a headache with digging and digging never enddidn’t need to have headaches from digging and digging with no end.
I realized the information I should take is only what is useful for my life or situation.
I only do what I have to make things I want them to workonly do what I need to do to make things work the way I want.
Paragraph 4
Right now it’s the same. I am trying to build my website and makesmake it live, hopefully earning money if possible.
I rejected all technicalrejected all the technical studying because I do not need to invest my time learning everything just to complete my website.
AI gives me what I need to know, and then I decide which information matches and make it happens on handsmake it happen with my own hands if needed.
I realized many things I spent time that was wastingthings I spent time on before were a waste.
Paragraph 5
From the information AI provided, I think I finally know why my memory was diffferntbecame different from when I worked.
He didn’t care how I did ,it; he only cared the resultabout the result I could produce.
ExcludedExcept the first job with lady bosses, ok?
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All of a sudden, when I moved here and had no more full‑time job, my brain changed.
I have a very short memory now, but many times I can remember after forcing my brain to dig out what I want.
That was causing me had a headache before got what I wantedcaused headaches before I got the answer.
AI told me my brain only keep what the matterskeeps what matters.
In onthe beginning, when I worked with AI, I felt unhealthy because my brain was overloaded.
And the part I am happiest about is: NO BOSS to command me or give me the deadlinedeadlines.
I am the boss.
