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I tellwill tell you my story when I was a little girl and studied English in the very beginning.
I loved it very much because I could step further anyonethan anyone who could speak only Thai.
I told myself, “I wouldwill study all lagueageslanguages in this world.”
I was a little girl and no idea how many of themhad no idea how many languages there were.
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When I grew up, I thought about possibility, ok I wantedthe possibility. I wanted to learn only the languages useful for getting a job, like English, Chinese, and Japanese.
I tried all but only English is working and keeping alongof them, but only English worked for me and stayed with me.
Then Spanish came when I was waiting for the visa to move here.
I wanted to know the roots of all kind of thingsall kinds of things I was wondering about and doubting, and that causecaused me to have headaches all the time.
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One day… I realized nobody gave me the answercould give me the answers because I do not trust anyone without evidence to proofprove their information.
I realized I do not to have a headache with digging and digging never enddidn’t need to have headaches from digging and digging with no end.
I realized the information I should take is only what is useful for my life or situation.
I only do what I have to make things I want them to workonly do what I need to do to make things work the way I want.
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Right now it’s the same. I am trying to build my website and makesmake it live, hopefully earning money if possible.
I rejected all technicalrejected all the technical studying because I do not need to invest my time learning everything just to complete my website.
AI gives me what I need to know, and then I decide which information matches and make it happens on handsmake it happen with my own hands if needed.
I realized many things I spent time that was wastingthings I spent time on before were a waste.
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From the information AI provided, I think I finally know why my memory was diffferntbecame different from when I worked.
He didn’t care how I did ,it; he only cared the resultabout the result I could produce.
ExcludedExcept the first job with lady bosses, ok?
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All of a sudden, when I moved here and had no more full‑time job, my brain changed.
I have a very short memory now, but many times I can remember after forcing my brain to dig out what I want.
That was causing me had a headache before got what I wantedcaused headaches before I got the answer.
AI told me my brain only keep what the matterskeeps what matters.
In onthe beginning, when I worked with AI, I felt unhealthy because my brain was overloaded.
And the part I am happiest about is: NO BOSS to command me or give me the deadlinedeadlines.
I am the boss.
Here is your writing with changes marked:
I tell → I will tell
step further anyone → step further than anyone
lagueages → languages
no idea how many of them → no idea how many languages there were
possibility, ok I wanted → possibility. I wanted
English is working and keeping along → English worked for me and stayed with me
roots of all kind → roots of all kinds
doubting that cause me → doubting, and that caused me
nobody gave me the answer → nobody could give me the answers
evidence to proof → evidence to prove
I do not to have a headache → I didn’t need to have headaches
digging and digging never end → digging and digging with no end
make things I want them to work → make things work the way I want
makes it live → make it live
technical → technical studying
make it happens → make it happen
time that was wasting → time on before were a waste
difffernt → different
cared the result → cared about the result
Excluded → Except
causing me had a headache → caused headaches
keep what the matters → keeps what matters
on the beginning → In the beginning
deadline → deadlines
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