My edition : Wan Bakery shop (past tense)
Wan liked to eat cakes. She learned at the baking school 2 years. She had the pink shop near the garden in the countryside. Her family owned the farm and they raised cows. The milk from their cows was the major ingredient for baking. Wan sold coffee too. There were many customers visiting the bakery shop. They sat and drank coffee or ate cakes inside and outside. Her mother and sisters worked and helped in the bakery shop.
My edition : Da loves reading books (present tense)
Da has been opening the book store for 10 years. Her store is in the city near a school. There are many books for sell and rent such as anime romance, fantasy novels and general. She has multiple customer groups every day. They can read in the reading room. Her store opens daily. Da likes to read the books very much. She wants to have a book store since childhood. Her dream comes true. Fantasy novels are her first choice to read. The Harry Potter and The Lord of the Rings are the most favorite books that she reads very often. She has many books because she likes to buy.
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