แต่งเรื่องจากโจทย์ Traveling Experience

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Wonderful experience

I work in  a company where I got an opportunity to travel abroad. The company would support anyone who met the sell target traveling oversea with the customers. I am so excited because I have never been gone from Thailand.

I would like to tell you about my experiences that I went to many countries.

The first country was Singapore. I did not worry about traveling there because it was a neighbor country which has similary lifestyle as my city. When I was there, I had to follow my friends the whole trip because  I worried about my language. That was the reason I could not travel alone.

Next was France, I got really thrilled(ใช้คำอื่นที่มีความหมายเหมือนexcited) started  at the immigration checkpoint when I saw the officers asked questions to travelers. Someone had to answer many questions but someone just smiled and could pass easily. However, I did not have any problem at all that was so relief.

We visited beautiful ancient places which I enjoyed very much but I did not happy with food. Mostly were steak. I surely missed Thai food.

The last country was Switzerland, the most beautiful city I could not complain. I had been here three times and loved it because of gorgeous natural and charming architecture. I never bored being here.

I am really glad to go abroad and see other countries and also I would love to travel in Thailand.

JI

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Life Experience

I work in a company where I had an opportunity to go oversea with customers when I met the target to success and got the reward. I was worrying and so excited because I had never been out of Thailand .I would like to share my experiences  that I visited foreign countries.

    The first country was Singapore.I didn't worry  about this country because there was analogous living and neighboring country of Thailand. I was concerned about English language , so I followed my friend as always along the trip.

     Second country was France, I had been excited since I had not entered the country yet. Started at the immigration checkpoint because you had to check one by one. Someone was asking by the officers several questions but some people just smiled and passed easily. This country was beautiful.The sightseeing were ancient. Most of the food was steak, which I didn't like at all.I missed Thai food.

    The last country was Switzerland. It was a beautiful country that I didn't know how to describe it. I had the opportunity to come here  three times but never get bored because the beauty of nature and the  attractive architecture.

  

    I am very glad that I had the opportunity to see places other than Thailand but I still like to travel in Thailand.