Tommy's view

Nov 29, 2010

From the 5 year-old boy, "Tommy".

In the morning after a big storm the frogs and rabbits are dancing while the humming birds are singing. Everything comes back as usual again. The animals start to do their routines. I draw the picture in my mind the most beautiful in front of me. A little dear is drinking water beside his mother at the pond where the frogs are dancing on the huge lotus leaf in the middle of the  pond. My father is kissing my mother before he gets into the car and drives to work. I come back into my room and am ready to have breakfast. I like my mother's food and eat all delicious dishes. Today I have a story to tell in my class and I will explain how beautiful is nature which I saw from my bed room. I fell in love with animals, trees and everything I saw. That fills my heart with love and peace. I found the most beautiful world just looking out of my bed room.

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Nov 29, 2010 — From a 5‑year‑old boy, "Tommy".

After the big storm, the frogs and rabbits were dancing, and the hummingbirds were singing. Everything felt normal again. All the animals were back to their routines. I pictured the scene in my mind, the most beautiful thing right in front of me.

A little deer was drinking water beside its mother at the pond, while the frogs danced on a huge lotus leaf in the middle of the water. My father kissed my mother before getting into the car and driving to work. I went back to my room, ready for breakfast. I love my mother’s cooking, and I always finish every delicious dish she makes.

Today I have a story to share in class. I will tell them how beautiful nature looked from my bedroom window. I fell in love with the animals, the trees, and everything I saw. It filled my heart with love and peace. I discovered the most beautiful world just by looking outside my room.