เรียน 5 เดือนเป็นยังไง ได้อะไรบ้าง เมื่อไรจบ เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ🤠

ภาษาอังกฤษพื้นฐาน เบื้องต้น very many แปลว่ามาก ใช้กับคำอะไรบ้าง🤠

แต่งเรื่อง Noi is small and thin จบเรื่อง

My version reference from the original

Noi is small and thin. She was married. This is her rice porridge shop near the river. The shop opens every day in the morning. The regular customers are the children because they must eat breakfast before go to school. There are many fishes, the monitor lizards, the turtles and the birds in the rivulet. The parents like to bring their kids to eat here because the price is cheap. Therefore, there are many customers at that time. The children like to sit inside the shop and enjoy look at the fishes. There are many choices in the menu such as pork, shrimp, fish with or without rice porridge. Noi is kind. Anyone does not have money can eat for free or a half price.

My version, refer to the same idea as the original and changes.

Noi is a small and thin young woman. She was married but does not have any children. She owns a rice porridge shop near the river. The shop opens every day serving only breakfast. The regular customers are the families with children. The parents save their cooking time and stop here before school. The welcoming atmosphere makes everyone especially kids enjoy their meals. Besides, the cost is very much cheaper when compare to cooking at home. Therefore, there are many customers every day. There are many choices in the menu such as pork, shrimp, fish with or without rice porridge.

There are many fishes, the monitor lizards, the turtles and the birds in the rivulet. The children love to sit next to the windows and enjoy look at the fishes.  

Noi is kind. She offers free meals to everybody who does not have money once a week and also a half price once a month.

แต่งเรื่อง Wild flowers field

 attempt 1 : Draft

attempt 2 : finished

My version reference from the original

Sunny is a nice little girl living with her parents in a small town of Kentucky. The summer is her favorite season because she loves and admires the blooming colorful flowers. Not just the flowers but wild flowers which rarely seeing anywhere. They grow naturally in their property. It is the rich agricultural heritage amazing place behind their house. Sunny has this field as her most love landscaping in her heart and never turn face away. The nature is looking after themselves without human care. How enchantment is that? Although, Sunny and her parents give extra treat as supplement to help them grow stronger and glorious.

The blossom invites a parade of buzzing bees, butterflies, deer and rabbits entering in the garden. Apparently, the native sunflowers turn their face up as high as they can to reach the sky and bursting with colorful flushing. Moreover, the mixture of colors and the magnificent plants along the fences. These flowers are not only added the beauty to the environment but also supporting local ecosystem. The huge creeping, classy bushes down the roadside. The white carrot florets are higher than the enclosure.

Sunny is spending most days wandering around the meadow surrounded by the lilies blossom, milk weeds, butter cups, clovers, dandelions, yellow hawkweeds, oxeye daisies, black-eyed susan, mulleins , chicories, common thistles and goldenrod. She loves sharing her blissful times to others.

Besides, the family hangs the bird feeders on the trees to feed various birds in the area. Of course, there are many birds visit all year long. The dried seed heads up throughout the winter that is the quiet time of the year.

 

แต่งเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษ เบื้องต้น Noi is small and thin ยังไม่จบ😁

A letter to Adam Poor man and Rich man

แต่งประโยคภาษาอังกฤษ ใช้ article และ preposition🤠

ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง Dum and friends

attempt 1

attempt2

 

My version reference from both original above: 

There is an old black male stray dog walking on the street in a small and busy town. It is pretty autumn in south Minnesota but no matter for "Dum" the stray dog and his fellow friends. A yellow cat "Sachi"  the same age as Dum is the genuine companion. He has a long tail and short ears. Apparently, he cannot hear well. They live inside an old building not far from the market. They make new friends with a blind raccoon and a white rabbit at a fruit stand. Also, a fatty groundhog comes along when they search for food under the tree in the park. The blind raccoon live in the big hole under the deadwood. He divides a part of his cavity to the tiny rabbit. In exchange, the rabbit gives him carrots and green veggies which he picks up from the vegetables plantation. Under the oldest church is the cosy pit where fatty lazy groundhog spend most of the time sleeping. He is not an energetic animal  but he goes out when hungry to search for food. It is a big benefit to him after joining the group because he only follows and waits to get his portion. However, he helps with carrying and dragging food when friends need extra hands without asking. 

As winter is coming, they must collect as many as food and fresh water enough then none leaves the warm houses to search for feeding the hungers. Everyone gets together and walks along the street. Each animal stops at the assign locations such as the market, the farm, the church and end at the train station. By the end of the day, they gather many edible items like big punches of bread, carrots and green vegetables, fried chicken, noodles and more. They help each other transport most consumable objects to their places and start the seeking again the next day. By the end of the autumn, they would get enough elements and that will be the time to rest and joy in their warm places through the cold weather.

Lucky news, they hear from the radio at the market that the district officers are going to build the zoo nearby the church. This is a chance for all of them to move out from the street and have a nicer place to live with plenty of food. Although, it is a long while not this winter.

ฝึกแต่งประโยคภาษาอังกฤษ very many

 

ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง ระดับพื้นฐาน Bakery shop / Book store

 

attempt1

My edition : Wan Bakery shop (past tense)

Wan liked to eat cakes. She learned at the baking school 2 years. She had  the pink shop near the garden in the countryside. Her family owned the farm and they raised cows. The milk from their cows was the major ingredient for baking. Wan sold coffee too. There were many customers visiting the bakery shop. They sat and drank coffee or ate cakes inside and outside. Her mother and sisters worked and helped in the bakery shop.

attempt2

My edition : Da loves reading books (present tense)

Da has been opening the book store for 10 years. Her store is in the city near a school. There are many books for sell and rent such as anime romance, fantasy novels and general. She has multiple customer groups every day. They can read in the reading room. Her store opens daily. Da likes to read the books very much. She wants to have a book store since childhood. Her dream comes true. Fantasy novels are her first choice to read. The Harry Potter and The Lord of the Rings are the most favorite books that she reads very often. She has many books because she likes to buy.