Organic cake : Pailin

 Create a story about "CAKE"

แต่งเรื่องเกี่ยวกับ CAKE

นักเรียนเลือกแต่งเป็น Past tense ส่งครั้งที่หนึ่ง จินตนาการไม่ผ่าน เพราะนักเรียนเขียนแนวนี้บ่อย เกือบทุกเรื่องที่แต่ง ชื่อตัวละครใช้ซ้ำหลายครั้ง สถานที่ คำซ้ำ ไม่ได้เรียนรู้คำใหม่ แนะนำ ให้ไอเดีย และให้แต่งมาใหม่

ครั้งที่สอง จินตนาการดีขึ้นมาก

My edition : using various of wording as many as I can think of and looked up if they were suitable. Practicing and learning synonym

Margaret 52 years old woman who worked in the big town, Denver Colorado for her whole life decided to pursue her dream after read a magazine column. It was about a healthy organic bakery. Subsequently, she resigned from work and went back to the small hometown. Her parents were pleased to help and also their tiny farm was a very valuable source. There were various native flowers and vegetables which became Margaret 's invention cakes ingredients. The first Margaret organic healthy-delicious cake was ready to serve everyone in town. She set up her shop well and ready for the grand opening day. The official welcoming invitation sign put out at the front door addressed the significant cake picture. Many people in the community, family members and friends were grateful with her celebration. Also, it was a wide spread well-known organic cake in Margaret Bakery in a very short period of time. Her parents were cheerful and proud of her. The dream was not a dream anymore.