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Wednesday, March 26, 2025

Organic cake : Pailin

 Create a story about "CAKE"


แต่งเรื่องเกี่ยวกับ CAKE

นักเรียนเลือกแต่งเป็น Past tense ส่งครั้งที่หนึ่ง จินตนาการไม่ผ่าน เพราะนักเรียนเขียนแนวนี้บ่อย เกือบทุกเรื่องที่แต่ง ชื่อตัวละครใช้ซ้ำหลายครั้ง สถานที่ คำซ้ำ ไม่ได้เรียนรู้คำใหม่ แนะนำ ให้ไอเดีย และให้แต่งมาใหม่


ครั้งที่สอง จินตนาการดีขึ้นมาก



My edition : using various of wording as many as I can think of and looked up if they were suitable. Practicing and learning synonym

Margaret 52 years old woman who worked in the big town, Denver Colorado for her whole life decided to pursue her dream after read a magazine column. It was about a healthy organic bakery. Subsequently, she resigned from work and went back to the small hometown. Her parents were pleased to help and also their tiny farm was a very valuable source. There were various native flowers and vegetables which became Margaret 's invention cakes ingredients. The first Margaret organic healthy-delicious cake was ready to serve everyone in town. She set up her shop well and ready for the grand opening day. The official welcoming invitation sign put out at the front door addressed the significant cake picture. Many people in the community, family members and friends were grateful with her celebration. Also, it was a wide spread well-known organic cake in Margaret Bakery in a very short period of time. Her parents were cheerful and proud of her. The dream was not a dream anymore.



Monday, March 17, 2025

Cha Am : practice writing/ Pailin


 

My edition:

Riccardo studied at Bangkok University. He was an exchange student from Italy. He always set up the trip on weekends to see places and gather friends along the way. He loved scenic seeing and enjoyed exploring out of the city. He found an interesting one-day-train trip information from TOT website. According to that, it made him very excited to get on the train as it was going to be his new experience. Hence, he invited his friends, Bob, Malee and Malai, then agreed to meet at the train ticket booth. They picked Cha-Am beach route because all of them loved to see the shore and enjoyed the wave. They had their responsibility to do things needed for the trip such as buying tickets, taking beach items, bringing food, etc. They would meet at the meeting point by 8 a.m on Sunday and got there by noon. They had breakfast on the train at their seats and looked out through the windows. They were having fun on the train, seeing rice fields and agricultural along while the train moved. The local villagers grew pineapples and other kinds of fruits and vegetables.  Besides, they were amazed when saw the train track behind the train bit by bit. That was a cool thing for teenagers first time train traveling. Also, they were playing a board game on the train before getting to the destination. They placed the mat on the sand under the coconut tree and spent time by the beach. There were a group of children playing near by. It was a wonderful day but a happy time end too soon. They packed everything and went to the bus station to catch the mini van at 7 p.m. It took about 2.30 hrs to Bangkok. They could not come back by train because the last one was too early at 2 p.m. However, they had a fantastic experience. Riccardo and his friends would loved to do the train trip more.



Sunday, March 2, 2025

ฝึกเล่าเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษI do not like cleaning but I am a housekeeper Do you think cleaning is easy?

ฝึกเล่าเรื่อง ไม่มีสคริป นึกว่าจะเล่าอะไร แล้วเล่าเลย เบื้องหลัง พูดผิดเยอะ ตัดออกเยอะมาก 🤠 สนุกค่ะ



Friday, February 28, 2025

ส่งการบ้าน แต่งประโยคใช้ would like to 🤠







ส่งการบ้าน แต่งเรื่อง my house past tense 🤠








My Edition ปี เดือน จำนวนตัวเลข สมมุติ  year, month,  number are making up

It was my beautiful childhood memory. When I was a child , my family and I  lived in Bangkok's suburb.  My parents relocated from North Eastern of Thailand in 1869. They raised me, sisters and brothers in a medium size bamboo hut. The palm leaves roof did not protect rain leaking well, however, we could manage that issue with ease. Meanwhile, I always dreamed to have my own house which better and bigger than the hut. Eventually, my dream came true after I worked and collected enough money to get a bankrupt house from the bank.  I was 19 years old when started working and took five years until I got the down payment for my first house. Even though, the house needed a big renovation which caused me a million baht. After all, we moved in the house and brought  pets ; a cat and three dogs along. It was the most beautiful house and I was very proud of myself.  Unfortunately, I left the house in Thailand and moved permanently to the USA after married to my husband and did not have a chance to go back again. 

ปล. ใช้คำ house เยอะ อ้างอิงจากต้นฉบับ

2nd Edition try not to use the word "HOUSE" to often

It was my beautiful childhood memory. When I was a child , my family and I  lived in Bangkok's suburb.  My parents relocated from North Eastern of Thailand in 1869. They raised me, sisters and brothers in a medium size bamboo hut. The palm leaves roof did not protect rain leaking well, however, we could manage that issue with ease. Meanwhile, I always dreamed to have my own house which better and bigger than the hut. Eventually, my dream came true after I worked and collected enough money to get a bankrupt asset from the bank.  I was 19 years old when started working and took five years until I got the down payment for my first property. Even though, the place needed a big renovation which caused me a million baht. After all, we moved in the accommodation and brought  pets ; a cat and three dogs along. It was the most beautiful venue and I was very proud of myself.  Unfortunately, I left the estate in Thailand and moved permanently to the USA after married to my husband and did not have a chance to go back again.