แกรมม่าพื้นฐาน จับคู่ แต่งประโยคภาษาอังกฤษเบื้องต้น🤠

เรียนภาษาอังกฤษออนไลน์กับพี่โอ้ท 5 เดือนแล้ว สนุก ทบทวน ถาม ตอบ พื้นฐาน🤠

เรียน 5 เดือนเป็นยังไง ได้อะไรบ้าง เมื่อไรจบ เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ🤠

ภาษาอังกฤษพื้นฐาน เบื้องต้น very many แปลว่ามาก ใช้กับคำอะไรบ้าง🤠

แต่งเรื่อง Noi is small and thin จบเรื่อง

My version reference from the original

Noi is small and thin. She was married. This is her rice porridge shop near the river. The shop opens every day in the morning. The regular customers are the children because they must eat breakfast before go to school. There are many fishes, the monitor lizards, the turtles and the birds in the rivulet. The parents like to bring their kids to eat here because the price is cheap. Therefore, there are many customers at that time. The children like to sit inside the shop and enjoy look at the fishes. There are many choices in the menu such as pork, shrimp, fish with or without rice porridge. Noi is kind. Anyone does not have money can eat for free or a half price.

My version, refer to the same idea as the original and changes.

Noi is a small and thin young woman. She was married but does not have any children. She owns a rice porridge shop near the river. The shop opens every day serving only breakfast. The regular customers are the families with children. The parents save their cooking time and stop here before school. The welcoming atmosphere makes everyone especially kids enjoy their meals. Besides, the cost is very much cheaper when compare to cooking at home. Therefore, there are many customers every day. There are many choices in the menu such as pork, shrimp, fish with or without rice porridge.

There are many fishes, the monitor lizards, the turtles and the birds in the rivulet. The children love to sit next to the windows and enjoy look at the fishes.  

Noi is kind. She offers free meals to everybody who does not have money once a week and also a half price once a month.

แต่งเรื่อง Wild flowers field

 attempt 1 : Draft

attempt 2 : finished

My version reference from the original

Sunny is a nice little girl living with her parents in a small town of Kentucky. The summer is her favorite season because she loves and admires the blooming colorful flowers. Not just the flowers but wild flowers which rarely seeing anywhere. They grow naturally in their property. It is the rich agricultural heritage amazing place behind their house. Sunny has this field as her most love landscaping in her heart and never turn face away. The nature is looking after themselves without human care. How enchantment is that? Although, Sunny and her parents give extra treat as supplement to help them grow stronger and glorious.

The blossom invites a parade of buzzing bees, butterflies, deer and rabbits entering in the garden. Apparently, the native sunflowers turn their face up as high as they can to reach the sky and bursting with colorful flushing. Moreover, the mixture of colors and the magnificent plants along the fences. These flowers are not only added the beauty to the environment but also supporting local ecosystem. The huge creeping, classy bushes down the roadside. The white carrot florets are higher than the enclosure.

Sunny is spending most days wandering around the meadow surrounded by the lilies blossom, milk weeds, butter cups, clovers, dandelions, yellow hawkweeds, oxeye daisies, black-eyed susan, mulleins , chicories, common thistles and goldenrod. She loves sharing her blissful times to others.

Besides, the family hangs the bird feeders on the trees to feed various birds in the area. Of course, there are many birds visit all year long. The dried seed heads up throughout the winter that is the quiet time of the year.

 

แต่งเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษ เบื้องต้น Noi is small and thin ยังไม่จบ😁

A letter to Adam Poor man and Rich man

แต่งประโยคภาษาอังกฤษ ใช้ article และ preposition🤠

ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง Dum and friends

attempt 1

attempt2

 

My version reference from both original above: 

There is an old black male stray dog walking on the street in a small and busy town. It is pretty autumn in south Minnesota but no matter for "Dum" the stray dog and his fellow friends. A yellow cat "Sachi"  the same age as Dum is the genuine companion. He has a long tail and short ears. Apparently, he cannot hear well. They live inside an old building not far from the market. They make new friends with a blind raccoon and a white rabbit at a fruit stand. Also, a fatty groundhog comes along when they search for food under the tree in the park. The blind raccoon live in the big hole under the deadwood. He divides a part of his cavity to the tiny rabbit. In exchange, the rabbit gives him carrots and green veggies which he picks up from the vegetables plantation. Under the oldest church is the cosy pit where fatty lazy groundhog spend most of the time sleeping. He is not an energetic animal  but he goes out when hungry to search for food. It is a big benefit to him after joining the group because he only follows and waits to get his portion. However, he helps with carrying and dragging food when friends need extra hands without asking. 

As winter is coming, they must collect as many as food and fresh water enough then none leaves the warm houses to search for feeding the hungers. Everyone gets together and walks along the street. Each animal stops at the assign locations such as the market, the farm, the church and end at the train station. By the end of the day, they gather many edible items like big punches of bread, carrots and green vegetables, fried chicken, noodles and more. They help each other transport most consumable objects to their places and start the seeking again the next day. By the end of the autumn, they would get enough elements and that will be the time to rest and joy in their warm places through the cold weather.

Lucky news, they hear from the radio at the market that the district officers are going to build the zoo nearby the church. This is a chance for all of them to move out from the street and have a nicer place to live with plenty of food. Although, it is a long while not this winter.

ฝึกแต่งประโยคภาษาอังกฤษ very many

 

ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง ระดับพื้นฐาน Bakery shop / Book store

 

attempt1

My edition : Wan Bakery shop (past tense)

Wan liked to eat cakes. She learned at the baking school 2 years. She had  the pink shop near the garden in the countryside. Her family owned the farm and they raised cows. The milk from their cows was the major ingredient for baking. Wan sold coffee too. There were many customers visiting the bakery shop. They sat and drank coffee or ate cakes inside and outside. Her mother and sisters worked and helped in the bakery shop.

attempt2

My edition : Da loves reading books (present tense)

Da has been opening the book store for 10 years. Her store is in the city near a school. There are many books for sell and rent such as anime romance, fantasy novels and general. She has multiple customer groups every day. They can read in the reading room. Her store opens daily. Da likes to read the books very much. She wants to have a book store since childhood. Her dream comes true. Fantasy novels are her first choice to read. The Harry Potter and The Lord of the Rings are the most favorite books that she reads very often. She has many books because she likes to buy.

ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง Bekery shop

attempt 1

attempt 2

my version reference from above; Bakery House

 One day in summer was a school holiday for Moon. She was sitting in the car with her family on the highway. They took a vacation and headed to the countryside where they would spend time for the whole week. Along their way, it was a big commercial sign displayed the famous "Bakery House"only 5 minutes away. The father  stopped in front of it and said to all members, "Hey, this bakery is interesting and we should check inside".  Everyone did not hesitate and quickly stepped out of the car.  

The bakery house was on the hill where could see a valley and scenic.  The small pond was in the front under the big tree. There were five ducks swimming in the clear water and the little two cats laid down on the tree root. There were few tables and chairs set outside for customers to admire the view.

Inside the bakery house, there were people before us on the line  and an old man was interacting with the customers and smiling all the time.  Everyone pleased with his friendliness.  Also, he introduced himself to us as uncle Danny and guided us to the shop history exhibited in a small corner. It began after he got the piece of land after his father then he started to plan and built this homy kitchen style. However, he did not want to make it a restaurant but small and quick grab and go. There was a young woman in the pictures who was uncle Danny's daughter. She was the head baker and recipe creator but she did not at the shop on the day we stopped.  His wife was the main supporter and the only co-founder since the establishment of the bakery house. We saw her at the ordering counter with a cute apron and a happy face.

Their daughter loved flowers and planted varies in the garden behind the shop. Amazingly, she invented the delicious flowers bakery which was their signature and being famous in the area.

We spent time in the bakery house half an hour. The atmosphere was great and the bakery was fantastic. Also, the history behind was fascinating. The father mentioned that they would stop again on their way back home.

ฝึกเขียนภาษาอังกฤษ selling ฝึกจินตนาการ

นักเรียน

attempt 1

My version reference from the original:

Nuch is a single mother who raises a 2 years old daughter at home. She would like to get more money for her daughter education. She has a small clothing store online. Her products are used good fashion outfits. There are many good condition donated clothing, shoes and bags from her neighbors and the women in the community. 

There is a weekend market nearby her place where she is going to reserve a stall. It is a big festival that would bring many people out of the city to participate. The neighbors are excited about this big event and cheer her up to make more money.

attempt 2

My version reference from the original:

Anna is being a small business owner selling crops from her parents's farm. She is only 17 years old and very energetic. She has a huge goal in her mind about her business future.

Anna was grew up in a middle class farmer family. They could not afford her to attend the college. Luckily, they had a piece of land on the hill where Anna started to do her thing. Her parents's farming was very successful. The vegetables and fruits always fresh and beautiful which on demand. Everyone was brainstorming and agreed to build the stall in front of the house and retail their crops. After harvested, three of them set up the shelves in the stall ready for a grand opening. There were numerous bins stored each kind of vegetables and fruits. The name sign " Your Garden" hung up and the arrow sign pointed to the merchandise displayed next to the road. A huge special price attached to the poles. The goods sold out in a half day. The customers were neighbors and people on the road passed by. 

On the next day, they got new products from the town because the customer requested. It was a great idea to add other crops beside what they had. They added more profit and save neighbors traveling time. None complained about higher cost than the market in town.

Anna used to think about working with a company in town. Since she has her own stall at home and earn money fast, she has never thought about working again.

attempt 3

 

อายุเยอะ รื้อฟื้นภาษาอังกฤษ เริ่มตรงไหน😁

อายุเยอะแล้ว รื้อฟื้น ทบทวนพื้นฐานภาษาอังกฤษ แต่งประโยคเบื้องต้น

Hiking day : Practice writing

student version

 

My edition:

Hiking day

On a warm and nice day, a happy family agreed to go hiking at the park nearby home, "Grayson Highland State Park". It was the husband idea. 

Sugar was a lucky Asian woman who married to a very good American man and moved from the busy city of Thailand to live in the USA countryside. They enjoyed exploring in nature and educated their children, a daughter and two sons to love and admire everything surrounding. Everyone prepared their own belongings for a long hike and never forgot the walking sticks. They helped supporting the knees when walked on the long trails and maybe the steep hills. Five of them carried backpacks individually. The mother arranged water and lunches for each and put on the table which they grabbed and put in the backpacks before heading to the car. It took about two hours drive to get to the park entrance. The father was knowing the location very well. There was no park ranger around but not a problem. The visitors paid the daily fee $7 a day per car by their own.The envelopes provided for inserted the money and dropped in the box at the self service registration spot. Then, he tore the tag of the envelope and hung inside the car at the dashboard. Sugar was amazed by the system as people were sincerely. After that, they were heading to the parking lot where was 10 minutes away from the entrance. There were many cars that cause them drove around for a little while until they got a spot to park. Sugar realized from the amount of the cars that many people came to hike on the same day as them.

They walked slowly and appreciated everything they saw. Also, they walked carefully when steps on the hills and curves. Father walked in the front, children followed him and mother at the end of the row. There were narrow trails on the mountains. Many times, they stopped and stood at the side to let other people passed. The walking sticks were useful for everyone. Father always pointed at wild flowers and berries and explained to children then they learned about variety wild plants and fruits. Eventually, they were on the top of the big mountain and decided to have lunch. It was gorgeous scenery in front of them. Thus, they could see the valley from the distance.

None of them complained or tired but joyful and excited along the trails, especially when the children saw wild ponies. They were adorable. They spent 4 hours on the trails where did not need to walk back but it was a fork, direction back to the parking area. They were sweaty and stink but enjoyed the trip very much. 

It was a priceless family time.

ฝึกพูดภาษาอังกฤษด้วยตัวเอง เล่าเรื่อง

 ฝึกเล่าประกอบวิดิโอไทย แต่ละเหตุการณ์ต้องคิดก่อนนะคะ ไม่ได้เล่าได้เลย🤠

คิดว่าจะเล่าอะไรดี ไม่ได้เขียนสคริป เพราะวิดิโอตัดแล้ว ออกอากาศช่องไทยแล้วหลายวัน บางที่ผ่านมาเป็นเดือน เป็นปี เพิ่งนึกอยากเล่า (laughing hard) ท้าทายตัวเอง เล่าเรื่องประกอบเหตุการณ์ในวิดิโอ บางทีก็ไม่เกี่ยว มีเรื่องอยากเล่า เข้ากับเหตุการณ์ได้ เป็นวิธีฝึกภาษาอังกฤษของโอ้ท

ฟังที่ยูทูบช่อง Oath Peterson

ถูกบ้าง ผิดบ้าง ก็เล่าไปค่ะ คิดสด ไม่มีสคริป ฝึกแบบนี้จะได้คิดเร็ว ไม่กังวลแกรมม่า พยายามพูดให้ถูกที่สุดเท่าที่นึกได้ รวมถึงคำศัพท์ด้วย นึกอะไรได้ก่อนพูดก่อน 😅

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ฝึกแต่งเรื่อง The Archery Legend

นักเรียนส่ง ตรวจแล้ว คอมเม้นท์ให้แบบนี้

My edition : (I do not know about the game then I guess from what my student wrote and do my best to write it better. I did not do any research about the game, if you may ask.)

Spring was the season for outdoor activities which my husband loved and enjoyed to go out and did a bow shooting. It stared in the countryside where we lived. The local archery clubs were opening and welcoming the members. My husband was one of them who enthusiasm in shooting the bow very much. When he was a young man and travelling around the USA to compete his potential with other competitors. Of course, he always won the games that made him to be the archery legend. He skipped his beloved sport about 25 years and spent time with his work until the age of 71. He retired and returned to his favorite game again.

He applied for a senior tournament nearby more often and I went along with him every single trip. It was fun and glad to see him happy, even though, he did not win most.

For me, these were the chances to explore and learn new things, to know more people and made new friends. Also, admired the scenic , amazed the camping and studied the forest at each place we passed and stopped.

The local club charged $20 fee for each event. It was not bad when compared to the happiness that my husband got in return. There were 20-25 rubber animal targets at each club. There was a circle on each animal which displayed differences score of the shooting area on it. The targets were standing at the end of the shooting points.  The top score was 12 then 10, 8 and 5 subsequently. The total scare was the criteria for the competitor potential.

The bow shooting is my new experience in the USA. Eventually, I am not a shooter but a wife who follows her husband through all tournaments. I am glad to have more new friends along each game. Moreover, I have been learning how to play the game and admiring the nature most locations. Someone doubted, why don't I shoot the bow along with them. It is not my thing and I am fine to be around with them in the woods especially with my beloved husband.

พ่ออิจฉา My daddy is so jealous I had boobies for breakfast☺️

เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ หงุดหงิด ไม่เข้าใจสักที😁

เพิ่งเริ่มฝึกภาษาอังกฤษ เทียบตัวอักษรไทย ผู้เริ่มต้น😁

สามีเอาใจเมียในวันเกิด I want to be eight again อ่านตลกภาษาอังกฤษ☺️

hot ไม่ได้แปลว่าร้อน อุณหภูมิร้อน ความร้อน สั่งอาหารออนไลน์ hot กินไ่ม่ได้

อยากฝึกพูดภาษาอังกฤษ ไม่มีชาวต่างชาติพูดด้วย วิธีฝึกด้วยตัวเอง How to🤠

ภาษาอังกฤษพอได้ ไม่กล้าพูดเพราะกลัวผิด How to 🤠

แก่แล้ว เรียนภาษาอังกฤษทำไม วิธีฝึกด้วยตัวเอง🤠

ฝึกเขียนภาษาอังกฤษ แต่งเรื่อง แต่งนิทาน ใช้จินตนาการ หาคำใหม่ The delightful moment of wild animals

ฝึกเขียนภาษาอังกฤษ แต่งนิทาน แต่งเรื่อง ใช้จินตนาการ หาคำใหม่😁 Enchancted village

Coco's life : Enchanted village

 My edition

Enchanted village

Coco is a magic puppy because he has a special ability to speak and fly which other dogs cannot do. He lives in a wonderful village where people build the houses on the trees. Surprisingly, most people can fly as well. Moreover, the words they speak transform to golden flowers which make them wealthy. All living creatures in this village can speak and their words change to thing they need for living pleasantly. There are golden birds flying over the top of the emerald castle on the hill as all time, days and nights. They guard the family by seeing wide area from the sky. If they spot something unusual, then they turn to giants and protecting, fighting or do whatever as guardian to safe the castle and their masters. There is a massive workers in the land. They do agriculture and grow many kinds of crops such as rice, fruits , corns, varies vegetables and flowers. Of course, real flowers which never change to anything. On harvest season, the produces prepare and ready for exchanging to nearby villages to get whatever they cannot make or grow in the village. Obviously, the golden flowers from their words use for buying things outside. People from the village deliver their goods to those places because no one from outside can enter the village.The enchantment makes everyone who tries to come lost in the woods and never reach. Coco is a member of the family who lives in the emerald castle. He goes out everyday to help senior people and plays with children during the day and comes home before dark. Everything in the village is delightful.

The funny and happy wild animals / The delightful moment of wild animals

 

My edition

The delightful moment of wild animals

In the big woods far away from the town, there is a huge group of wild animals live happily together with love and peace. They are cerebrating their new born babies of all kinds and the supreme time for the great lion to remove his tuft. All kind of the animals attend the major event. Also, the stage to perform for talent animals both new and experiences. For instance, a peacock makes a tail-feathers spread dancing, a hog plays a clarinet, a dog plays a trumpet, a bear beats the drum along, a rhino plays slide, a beauty bunny sings English song, a turtle plays a saxophone, and a monkey plays the guitar. The music is magnificent, surrounded in the woods. Everybody enjoys and cheerful. Furthermore, a sweet female gibbon leads to a sexy dancing on the floor and invites all friends to join her. Once, the great lion gets on the stage and gives gratitude speech, everyone is quiet and listen to him. It is late night, the party time is over but the souls are always awake and wild in all animals.

Little house in the big woods

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เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ ความอดทนน้อย🤠

เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ เริ่มอะไรก่อน แกรมม่า จำประโยค😁

พื้นฐานภาษาอังกฤษ Map ภาพสรุป😁

A little tiny thing📚 practice reading

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เรียนภาษาอังกฤษตอนอายุเยอะ ทำย้งไงให้จำได้ แต่งประโยคเป็น How to🤠