เขียนให้เป็นตัวอย่าง เรื่องของพี่อ้อย เค้าโครงเรื่องเดิมของพี่อ้อย ช่วงท้ายเรียบเรียงใหม่ให้ต่อเนื่อง เข้ากับเหตุการณ์อะไรเกิดก่อน หลัง สมเหตุสมผลค่ะ เพราะเด็กไม่น่าจะหาสัตว์มาเลี้ยงเองได้ 😁 โอ้ทคิดเองนะ
The kids lost in the wood
Two years ago, there were two children from a small village stole a canoe from a man next door. They wanted to play adventure without thinking about dangerous. They had so much fun canoeing and did not notice that the hard water currents brought them far away from the village and headed to the deep wood. It took a long while until they realized and started to shout for help but no one came to rescue. The canoe was floating along the water and got stuck at the big rock. They were very panic and scared. As night fell, the forest was dark and cold. The sky was black as ink. They heard many strange sounds surrounded. The children were afraid, if they would never be found. They had no idea how to get out from the wood. They were very exhausted and hungry then agreed to get off the canoe. They walked not far and saw a hut , then got inside. Lucky, there were fruits in a big palm sculpture and water in a pitcher. The kids ate and drank all then felt asleep. The next morning, there were fresh fruits in the big palm sculpture and water full in the pitcher. The kids ate, drank and played around the hut. They enjoyed and did not think to go back home and never worried about food and water because every morning, the palm sculpture and pitcher always full.
A year later, a group of adventurers canoeing on the same direction and found their canoe. You do not believe this, the canoe was still there. They found the kids and brought them back to the village.
The two children discovered a good experience and came back to the hut. They developed
the area outside the hut for planting and raised animals such as chicken and ducks. Sometimes, their parents came along and stayed overnight as a family secret camp.
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