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Memorable moment

Ten years ago, there was a peaceful village on the top of the big mountain where covered with trees and flowers. People were very happy, kind and love each other. They helped each other with everything needed to be done. There was a huge open area for farming. Everyone was enjoying while doing farm work. There were variety of flowers such as roses, lilies, daisies, blank eyes, tulips and more which were blooming all year round. There were plenty of fruits to pick and sell, for example, apples, walnuts, mangoes, jackfruits and coconuts. Also, the giant oak tree with wide branches. Everyone in the village gathered under the oak tree every weekend. They played and do did fun activities together after working hard for the whole week. 

That is a good memory which a young girl never forget. She moved to a big city and just comes back for the first time. Everything still the same but only herself alone in her family. Everyone passed away. She gets inside the very old house and open the windows. The air comes into the house and smells fragrance from flowers in the garden touches her nose. The pictures of her parents and herself in the garden pop up that brings a small tear to her eyes. She sits on an old yellow chair which covered with an orange cloth. It is raining outside then she walks to the windows again and looks at the gazebo next to the well. That reminds her on the first day her father brought a rabbit to her as a birthday gift while she was sitting at the gazebo. She thinks of the old time with a pleasant heart. 

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Bad situation

There is a big garden located in Pattaya. Many people would like to go there because there are many kinds of flowers such as roses, lilies, lotuses and more. There are fantastic animals show  which entertain visitors especially elephants performance. Currently is flooding in Pattaya because of heavy rain every day. Some people sit on the windows and shout for help. Look over the temple, there are many people stay in a gazebo escape from water. The monks take care dogs and cats that survived from flooding. Their owners can check out for the lost pets at the temple. 

There are many plants such as coconut trees, mango trees and jackfruit trees on the big mountain in this area. Besides,  there is a Thai spirit house nearby the big mountain. It is decorated with  yellow, orange, pink ,red and green clothes/fabrics. Those are from people who are in the 

hazardous situation like flooding as they wish to get across from this circumstance very soon.

Ji 

Enjoy trip

Nan and friends are going to the garden.There are flowers such as roses and trees so as oaks, walnuts and apples.It is There are very beautiful yellow and orange leaves.  very beautiful.Now it It is heavy raining heavily.They are running to the gazebo for shelter form the rain.Nan looks at outside the windows.She saw sees a turtle and rabbits near a tank.It is They are so cute.Nan’s friends like here because it  the weather is good weather.They will come again.

Da

Weekend in the park

Anna and her friend go to the park. 

They had have a picnic under the mango tree near the jackfruit tree and coconut trees. They were are near a pond with which a snakes inside but they are not afraid of it. Anna goes to the other side of the pond to see the pink and orange lilies. There were are butterflies flying around him her. Suddenly, the rain fell  falls, they had have to go into the gazebo. They were are at the window looking at the snake on the mango tree. They like the rain because it keeps him  them safe.