Awesome Summer

 

I wrote this in 2011 for ESL homework

Awesome Summer

I had a great time this summer. We went to Niagara falls for 4 days. My friend "Bim" went with us. I was really impressed at how beautiful Niagara Falls is. We got on the boat and went close toffee the water fall's mist and walked up on the stairs at the highest place the park provided to feel the strength of the water falls. I took many photos of the water-falls, of course. In the night, there were beautiful fireworks and the beautiful colored light from the Canadian side through the falls. We went across to the Canadian side but we got rejected because our friend did not have a Canadian Visa. Anyway, we were not upset as we talked about if this happened earlier. We went up to the sky in a helicopter but just my husband and I because our friend was scared. She thought, the helicopter was too small but she missed seeing a wonderful view. We also got on a jet boat. It was a fantastic experience which I had never done before. I was scared on the jet boat especially when the boat hit big waves. I told Bim,"the helicopter ride was nothing to be scared about when compared with the jet boat". She replied, "Yes, I guess so, and if I knew what was going to happen, I would not have gotten into the jet boat too". We went to the Buffalo Zoo, the last thing before coming back to Delaware.

ฝึกแต่งเรื่องจากคำภาษาอังกฤษที่กำหนด Ep.1 house, window, buy 😁 JDE

คำ house, window, buy , fish, car, sleep ,smile, wake up ,swimming

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แต่งเรื่องจากโจทย์ Traveling Experience

 โจทย์

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 (แกรมม่าไม่แม่นนะคะ  It does not grammatical correct but I made it better)

Wonderful experience

I work in  a company where I got an opportunity to travel abroad. The company would support anyone who met the sell target traveling oversea with the customers. I am so excited because I have never been gone from Thailand.

I would like to tell you about my experiences that I went to many countries.

The first country was Singapore. I did not worry about traveling there because it was a neighbor country which has similary lifestyle as my city. When I was there, I had to follow my friends the whole trip because  I worried about my language. That was the reason I could not travel alone.

Next was France, I got really thrilled(ใช้คำอื่นที่มีความหมายเหมือนexcited) started  at the immigration checkpoint when I saw the officers asked questions to travelers. Someone had to answer many questions but someone just smiled and could pass easily. However, I did not have any problem at all that was so relief.

We visited beautiful ancient places which I enjoyed very much but I did not happy with food. Mostly were steak. I surely missed Thai food.

The last country was Switzerland, the most beautiful city I could not complain. I had been here three times and loved it because of gorgeous natural and charming architecture. I never bored being here.

I am really glad to go abroad and see other countries and also I would love to travel in Thailand.

JI

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(แกรมม่าไม่แม่นนะคะ  It does not grammatical correct but I made it better)

Life Experience

I work in a company where I had an opportunity to go oversea with customers when I met the target to success and got the reward. I was worrying and so excited because I had never been out of Thailand .I would like to share my experiences  that I visited foreign countries.

    The first country was Singapore.I didn't worry  about this country because there was analogous living and neighboring country of Thailand. I was concerned about English language , so I followed my friend as always along the trip.

     Second country was France, I had been excited since I had not entered the country yet. Started at the immigration checkpoint because you had to check one by one. Someone was asking by the officers several questions but some people just smiled and passed easily. This country was beautiful.The sightseeing were ancient. Most of the food was steak, which I didn't like at all.I missed Thai food.

    The last country was Switzerland. It was a beautiful country that I didn't know how to describe it. I had the opportunity to come here  three times but never get bored because the beauty of nature and the  attractive architecture.

  

    I am very glad that I had the opportunity to see places other than Thailand but I still like to travel in Thailand.

ส่งการบ้าน Aorr Ep.1 Going to the zoo x Christmas time ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

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A dumb blonde getting on the bus อ่านภาษาอังกฤษและทำความเข้าใจเรื่อง

กระโปรงรัดติ้วก้าวขึ้นรถเมล์ไม่ได้

ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ Keeping Healthy 😹 Meow

Listening to English อ่านและทำความเข้าใจภาษาอังกฤษ

ส่งการบ้าน Ji Ep.11 Listening to Engish ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

ส่งการบ้าน JN Ep.2 Two Frogs ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

ส่งการบ้าน JN Ep.1 Keeping healthy ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

ส่งการบ้าน Ji Ep.10 An Ant and a Grasshopper ฝึกแต่งเรื่องและอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

Two Frogs อ่านภาษาอังกฤษและทำความเข้าใจ

was there a special time for making clothes? ฝึกอ่านและทำความเข้าใจภาษาอังกฤษ

ส่งการบ้าน Na Ep.28 Mom suspects her son of sleeping with his roommate ฝึกภาษาอังกฤษ

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ส่งการบ้าน JD Ep.4 ฝึกแต่งเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษตามโจทย์ที่คิดเอง Boy and Bass were on a trip together

อ่านและทำความเข้าใจเรื่องภาษาอังกฤษ A Hole in the Fence

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ภาษาอังกฤษอย่างเดียว English only

ส่งการบ้าน Da Ep.4 The greedy dog ฝึกอ่านภาษาอังกฤษ

อ่านและทำความเข้าใจภาษาอังกฤษ Parents tell their kids they're getting divorced

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อ่านและทำความเข้าใจภาษาอังกฤษ Mom suspects her son of sleeping with his roommate

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Holiday

The story I was writing for ESL homework in 2010. The teacher did not check this but I wrote it down and edited some.
Holiday
We were planning to visit my husband's family in North Dakota from the 22nd until the 26th of December for Christmas. Everything was good at the airport and made me think that this trip would be smoother than the 2 years ago. We were at Minneapolis Airport about 1:30 pm. checked in and went to the gate to ask about our seats. The airline staff told us to wait for a while because they were doing management. We waited until almost boarding time and then they told us that our seats had been taken away. What?
They told us, our flight would not be available until next afternoon but we could not wait. They gave us other options and we chose a sooner flight to the closest place to our destination. They gave us discount coupons for tickets to be good for a year.
We needed to change our car rental pick up location, so we needed to use the internet. We noticed that there were not many internet stations because everyone had laptops. We agreed to get a laptop because it was necessary for the time like this.
We stayed in Minneapolis Airport from 1:30 to 10:00pm. and got to our new destination. We drove about 3 hours to our hotel. It was the same distance as our original destination but the time we were in the airport was very boring.
I was so happy in North Dakota this year because we did not have a snow storm and the sky was beautiful. My husband took me to his family's ranch and a dam where I want to take photos. We had a good time with his family and also I got many presents. I love Christmas.
On the day we were traveling back to Delaware, there was a problem again. Our flight from Minneapolis was cancelled and the airline told us that it would be 2 days until the schedule would be back to normal because of the weather. My husband was really frustrated. Finally, we changed to another destination but still had to stay one night in Minneapolis. We flew at 7am. and got to Pittsburgh at 10am. and then drove 7 hours to Philadelphia, picked up our car and drove back home safely.

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