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One day in summer was a school holiday for Moon. She was sitting in the car with her family on the highway. They took a vacation and headed to the countryside where they would spending time for the whole week. Along their way, it was a big commercial sign displayed the famous "Farm Bakery"only 5 minutes away. The father stopped in front of it and said to all members, "Hey, this shop is interesting and we should check inside". Everyone did not hesitate and quickly stepped out of the car.
The bakery shop was on the hill where could see a valley and scenic. The small pond was in the front under the big tree. There were five ducks swimming in the clear water and the little two cats laid down on the tree root. There were few tables and chairs set outside for customers to admire the view.
Inside the bakery, there were people before us on the line and an old man was interacting with the customers and smiling all the time. Everyone pleased with his friendliness. Also, he introduced himself to us as uncle Danny and guided us to the shop history exhibited in a small corner. It began after he got the piece of land after his father then he started to plan and built this homy kitchen style. However, he did not want to make it a restaurant but small and quick grab and go. There was a young woman in the pictures who was uncle Danny's daughter. She was the head baker and recipe creator but she did not at the shop on the day we stopped. His wife was the main supporter and the only co-founder since the establishment of the bakery. We saw her at the ordering counter with a cute apron and a happy face.
Their daughter loved flowers and planted varies in the garden behind the shop. Amazingly, she invented the delicious flowers bakery which was their signature and being famous in the area.
We spent time in the bakery half an hour. The atmosphere was great and the bakery was fantastic. Also, the history behind was fascinating. The father mentioned that they would stopped again on their way back home.